Well, Fiona has deliberated and named the winners in our second Global Short Story Competition - and the successes have been divided between Canada and the UK this time.
Fiona said: “The overall standard was excellent, making it hard to select the winners, as usual.”
In the end, she chose as the winner of the £100 first prize a story called Barely Mischievous by Emren Meroglu, from Montreal, Canada.
Fiona said: “This is a deceptively simple story, and encompasses a wide range of emotions, moving effortlessly through tragedy and comedy and painting a thoroughly satisfying picture of childhood reactions and feelings. ”
“It’s very subtle the way the layers build up, and the fierce loyalty of a child to his friends and family is believable and touching. There are overtones of Harper Lee, and the author has really got into the eyes and heart and brave spirit of a boy meeting and dealing with the contradictions of an adult world.”
Second place went to Tom Conoboy, from Beverley, East Yorkshire, in the UK, with By the Ferry a Phoenix, who wins £25.
Fiona said: “Quite an achievement this, a complex idea and well sustained, atmospheric and evocative. There are enough surprises to keep your attention to the last word, and the sense of location is introduced very subtly, so that it grows around you, appealing to the senses in an accomplished way. Great title, too.”
Commended were Bodicea Greene, from Gidea Park, Essex in the UK, with Get Yourself Right, and Nick Capstick, from Swindon, in the UK, with Acid Drops.
Fiona said: “Get Yourself Right is a variation on a well-tried theme but it is done so well. Understatement is a great talent, especially when applied to dramatic subject matter, and this frees the reader to respond fully. Acid Drops is a difficult subject very well done. The (oh my god- no!)‚ ending is superb. Both of these accomplish the very difficult task of containing in a short story a satisfying sequence of thought and events, and a consistency of tone and style which is utterly believable.”
Well done to our winners. The current competition closes on February 29 and we are already getting some pretty impressive entries.
John Dean